Amazing!

Would use this in gd

I like the passionate vocals and furtive synths at the beginning. You do a good job of transitioning the texture to be more upbeat and melodic by :33. The production quality is really strong, and the rhythmic content is super catchy. The arrangement and sound design are a bit generic, but the glitchy bridge at 1:06 was a pleasant surprise. I would’ve liked to hear more of the hi-hats in the mix, though - they could use a boost in the EQ at the treble end. The piece might’ve also benefited from some more variety during the last refrain at 1:38, but it’s still a catchy and refreshing riff there. Overall, solid work, SPIRALi! My foot has been thoroughly tapped. ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8.25/10

I think that clap in the beginning as well as transition noise (at least the white noise sweep) could be softer

Same at the drop -- want softer cymbals, softer clap, just slightly (or alternatively vary volume/velocity of 1st clap)

I think I would like less of the low octave double to that acapella, more high mid on the upper octave, and a bit of tremelo panning 17% left and right, if not an obvious delay/chorus/widening effect. as is it sounds a bit dry.

The length of this track is a bit of a detractor for me. I wanted one more drop. But otherwise fabulous house track. Great work!