The subtle bassline is a really nice touch, in fact I’d say EVERYTHING about this song is subtle in the best way. You fill the space in creative ways, like that clever ringing sound especially. The drums sound pretty cheap, but they work for this one. I like the chord progression change at the end, that was a great way to close the track. Really groovy track, Pentalogue!

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Shows promise! I like it
I'd like it to be longer
Just so you're aware, the lack of drums in the first portion of the song leaves me wondering where the first beat of the measure is once the drums come in
even on the second listen
That's not a bad thing, though
I feel it provokes a thoughtfulness in the song, which kind of sounds like what youre going for
I think the either the snare should be changed to a snappy clap sound or the kick should be deeper, more echo-y, and/or busier
so the beat is groovy enough