its alright but could use some work

its alright but the only thing i see is the song stoping at times and cant keep the melody up but over all its not that bad just needs a little tune up and its good like adding some more instruments and such gettin it to sound all together. its not bad for the total time of the song just need a little more work ^^ good luck and have fun

not bad

wow that is pretty good i dont think that i could do better.......all thoe it could be better that was great!!