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I don't know what he does or who he is from this drawing besides that he seems like a nice guy. Give him an object to hold, a graphic on his shirt etc. I would also say make his silhouette stand out more. Make more confident strokes and exaggerate his stance just a little.
I feel like I probably won't unless I hear it's funny. I was never that big of a Shrek fan as opposed to Minecraft, so I have to watch the Minecraft movie regardless of how bad it looks.