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this game is quite entertaining. i liked the flow and the way the plot was designed. Very interesting indeed. Yet, it was too easy. The mechanic was the only character that didnt answer the investigator's questions and the game was pretty much just talking to people...it could be a little more like monkey island (interaction with objects is much much more entertaining 8B). Still, it was a very good shot, and im pretty sure that youre capable of doing even more elaborate games.
And, the characters could be a little more worked-up.
oh, and that creepy girl with the ballon looks like its coming on a sequel no?
Hm...that would be interesting xD
If you want to see a game with a really good plot, try Mystery Case Files. You might be amazed by the layout, scenes and creeepy story..... x3 maybe it will inspire you 8D
Just a hint, you might like it ;3