A fair attempt
I understand the somewhat random and bizarre nature of this piece of flash, but that being said it was simply executed poorly. The animation was average, nothing to flashy but it got the job done. The dialogue didn't make much sense, which is what you were going for, but it was also lacked any sense of comic timing. What I could understand of it anyway, which was for me the biggest issue here. I did not understand the voice acting very well so I had to guess at seventy percent of what was being said, which instantly destroys humor (unless that's the aim of the comic). Anyway, the ending bit had a touch more humor in it preempting harsh critiques but it went on too long and was also hard to understand. Albeit. . . . . his beard made me giggle, and for that alone I award you a six.