meeh

the animation was good, nothin wrong with that, voices were decent..just the jokes... I prefer more the random stuff...fast humor. Dont be afraid to speed things up abit, keeping it interesting. but overal a nice job! =)

Too long and better writing

Shorter and too the point would really help this. I realize they are bored but I get anxious for something interesting to happen. Also, some of the wording for your jokes is weak, think of how you can say them more clearly. Audio quality shifts between actors, throws off your vibe.

Kudos for trying clean subject matter, it's a lot harder than just saying ass and damn every ten seconds like a lot of the stuff 'round here. But if you are going to have your dialogue run the better part of your animation, it needs to be more solid, and more entertaining.

it was ok

awesome art, and the animation was mostly great too, but the lines were written pretty badly. I believe you're from finland? Nothing wrong with that, but you should get someone to review your script so it sounds a little more correct in english because there were some annoying errors.

Some of your voice actors weren't great actors. Good quality voice, but they couldn't act, no offense, but they need to practice. the villain sigma kept fading in and out of his accent, and his voice was frequently the wrong pitch, which is very inconsistent. Overall, the story kinda bored me, and it needed a lot more.

I'm not sure if you wanted it to be funny or action packed or what, but it needed more because I watched a couple of minutes and then just skipped to read the credits. Sorry. You're a great animator and artist, but you should work with some writers to get yourself started. Good luck

It was okay

It didn't impress me, but I didn't think it was bad either. Your animation was good, but the dialogue was boring. The quality of the sound was okay for the most part. Just get some better jokes, and work on the grammer. Other than that, it's an honest effort and atleast worthy of a 6.

You want constructive? Okay.

First and foremost, I'd like to congratulate you for having a pretty long run with the series so far... very few flash artists can pull that off. Oh, and I love X and Axel's voice.

Unfortunately, as much as I am a fan, I must also say that I'm disappointed with this one. The first fatal mistake was replacing Sigma's kick-ass Teisel-esque voice from the last episode with a wierd, almost fake british accent... and though Zero's scarf was indeed very funny, and your art just seems to improve each and every time, the funnies have run almost completely dry with this one. Don't get me wrong, the little switcheroo and the Revolutionary Mavericks loading screen was very interesting, but just about everything could've been better... not in the aesthetic sense, but the humor. I can see the tremendous amount of effort you've churned out to make this series possible, but that's why I have to speak up now.

You really, really need to crank up the humor and dish it out like you did in Episode 2 (the funnies waned in 3, but at least it had Sigma's voice). Because I can actually feel the desperation as I watched it, like you couldn't think of anything funny to play out in almost every part... your skill in drawing and animating flash is impressive, true. But unless you can get back the reason that made your series so popular in the first place--the funnies--then it's just going to continue its downward spiral into nothingness. Like the fact that Axel has such a girly voice compared to Zero, and X is a bit loony... I always found that amusing. Maybe you should try to take advantage of what you've got instead of always trying to think up of new material, know what I mean? But if you really intend to try something different in the next episode, a couple more wierd situations (meaing: new stupid missions!) would fit in rather nicely.

Get back the funny! I'm counting on you bud.