good but

it was good the flash work was nice and smooth to a point. i think you need to do some work on her walk/run cycle because it looked a little off. i agree with some of the others about it being front page worthy. maybe if you did a little more work on it it would be worth it. it looks like an interesting story but i also do think you are throwing way to much info onto your audiance at one time. like i would have waited on showing how the suit has powers. but other then that it wasnt to bad.

Its good

This could develop into a really great flash series. Good animation, didnt like the shaky camera that much but it did add to the setting.

not bad but realy confusing

it was prety good but why would they give her a suit to fite back against them.

seems like...

u got a few ideas from da game "Prey" like, the disgusting lookin doorways... etc... hahaha...

cant wait to see da rest...

pretty good

story line seems great.

the sound effects seem to be lacking.
maybe more of the footstep sounds and such can improve the video.
and the video movement made me a bit dizzy. sorta too fast and jerky.

its short, but i guess it only makes you crave for the next one.