It was really hard for me to get into this at first. There's no character voices, and the dialogue has spelling and grammatical errors abound. The fluid animation kept me going. But then I realized that you came up with an amazing plot idea. And I realize this is your first episode. If you were to continue this, your skills would surely improve, and you could add extra features. I would love to see you continue this series, not only to see what happens at this tournament, but also to see your progress as a flash artist. To be honest, I haven't been this excited about a flash series at it's inception since SMBZ.

Keep up the great work!

This is one of the best DBZ videos I have seen! The use of classic DBZ sound effects was great, animation was spot on, and explanation of everything was easy to follow. It would sound epic with voices I reckon, hmm if you wanted to add in voices maybe you could ask some of the famous voice actors on newgrounds like ricepirate, sure they would love to help with such a master piece. Probably keep the subtitles on also and in the next video maybe keep them just for a few more seconds, mainly the ones where a lot is said in regards to the story or longer lines. BUT SERIOUSLY AMAZING JOB! I have watched many series on newgrounds and this is THE MOST I AM LOOKING FORWARD TOO! After a very very long time, I am speechless at how amazing it is.

5/5 5/5 favorites and subscribed :D, keep it up!

Pretty good. You just need to work on the subtitling a little and correct the spelling if you want to keep it with subtitles. If you want to add voices later on, I would be very careful in the voice actors, as some people are very sensitive about how authentic voice actors have to sound.

BTW, great choice in picking DBM. I love that webcomic! :D

Instead of half assing and always saying " this is nothing awesome or epic! so dont expect much.."
Why don't you spend an appropriate amount of time and effort on something so you don't have to say that.

Anyways, about the animation. There was no life to it. Still shots with gaping mouths dropping up and down. Plus no voices?

Use more body language, frame by frame animation, and audio.

I enjoyed it very much so, I only have a few very minor critiques, I think next time you should do a quick spell check as every now and then I noticed a misspelled word, and my only other problem is when that clock thing started talking, I think either everyone or no one should have a voice actor, and not having voice actors does certainly not detract from this (at least for me) but when just one person speaks, it was a little bit surprising.