this is where ill store pics of my stuff since i guess my old one failed....ahh old memories

this is for C.H.O.W.

i hope its a druidess
its not complete yet but what do you think....criticize?...i dont know how to spell i got bad grammer...lol any waysss what do ya think so far?

cool angle, nice style, executed well, try thicker lines..maybe. thats the only criticism I have.

thicker lines...then it'll look crowded but i'll check it out.

nah i have it saved in different lines....so yeah i have like 3 copies of this pic...line art a bit coloured and this one....but does it look better?

point out the awkward parts so i can fix them up

At 7/5/07 06:21 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: i hope its a druidess
what do you think....criticize

Looking good so far, nice perspective.

a druidess in shirt and pants?

I like it. you should use the same thick line to define the ends of edges of the hair, try to get rid of the little dots near the end of her hair on the left side of the picture. and also, why are her two hands melded together?

yes a millinium druidess....lol look i have no clue what im drawing....the information i got from the chow thing is a druidess is a hood wearing staff carring thing that stays in the forest

You've chosen quite an angle there. I commend you - its a challenging figure.

I would try to redline it, but I really have no idea what a figure should look like from this perspective.

I suggest you make yourself an RL reference if you really want to fix all the kinks here. Hold up a camera or something, or get somone else to. If you snap the right picture, I'm sure you'll see where the problems are.

At 7/5/07 07:27 PM, Neolight wrote: You've chosen quite an angle there. I commend you - its a challenging figure.

I would try to redline it, but I really have no idea what a figure should look like from this perspective.

I suggest you make yourself an RL reference if you really want to fix all the kinks here. Hold up a camera or something, or get somone else to. If you snap the right picture, I'm sure you'll see where the problems are.

i supose i coulda tried that....seems easy...shit.....too late now i put to much time into this but yeah....my next pic im gonna do that....thanks for the advice

well how does it look now ?

This looks awsome. I assume your still working on the BG so I won't comment on that. I love the shading, espically on her pants and hoody. Only crit I got is the head and tee shirt looks a little weird, but at this angel it might be normal. OH, and speaking of the angel, I really like the Point of view you drew it from. It beats the normal side/frount view people ussally draw in.

At 7/5/07 07:33 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote:
well how does it look now ?

you can clearly see how you've put lots of time into the figure and not alot into the background. get rid of all the backing, and stick it in a much smaller rectangle on bbs grey, then outline the whole character with the same thick line only white, and you've got yourself one nice sticker. like, literally, you could take it somewhere to get it printed as a sticker and it would be awesome.

Sorry for the double post, I mean where the head meets the t-shirt looks a little wierd, other then that awsome.

It looks good, but the bright green is just TOO bright, it doesn't look natural :P

yeah, go back to the white tee, or match it with the pants.

like this

Ooh well the glow makes it look almost alien-like, and the shirt can stay glowing with that.

At 7/5/07 07:56 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: like this

lmao i give up im gonna submit the way it is....im gonna start a new one....so yeah....ill take every thing said into concideration

At 7/5/07 07:56 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: like this

that looks awesome, but no bright green! it just doesnt work with the darker green. stick with white.

Alright, good luck with it :P

this is my last upgrade then...i saved it as jepg now its like this F.O.R.E.V.E.R...

awesome. great job with the shadow in the ground too. I like it.

tthanks i should co you on this....but thanks for the touch up advice....im off to draw another pic

nice

alright im working on another piece...so yeah...should i give it hair a face and details?

clever way of bumping?...lol

heres a quick sketch i threw together...question.....should i finish it by colouring and all that fun?.....or should i sketch it all out?

well the line art sucks....neh i wasnt aiming for that.....i was aiming to get the colouring right so what do ya think so far?....yup

not done

At 7/8/07 10:05 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: well the line art sucks....neh i wasnt aiming for that.....i was aiming to get the colouring right so what do ya think so far?....yup

Its pretty sick so far, the hair colour is AMAZING! Yea the line art isn't the best as you said... her one boob is really fucked.

But the colouring is superb.

it took me an hour and i never took notice till i zoomed out after colouring...lmao oh well....ill try fixing that....for the hair it was rushed i like doing black hair....its easy

At 7/8/07 10:12 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: it took me an hour and i never took notice till i zoomed out after colouring...lmao oh well....ill try fixing that....for the hair it was rushed i like doing black hair....its easy

Lol zoom tool is murder =P

I still love the hair to pieces .

yea try and give her a nice boob job =P