Ouch my brain...
Wow this really wasn't funny at all! The art looked pretty good but that was about it. Your jokes were kinda childish and lets face it anime=EMO and that usually goes for games too, so there will always be EMO characters, rubbing that in peoples faces just kills these things i think. Other then that make jokes that people other then your friends find funny.
Oh well, thanks for your opinions anyway.
quite good but...
the voice arent really good. the graphic on the other hand are really good for a flash. the storyline could use some improvement but whats thye most important thing to fix is the voice.
I know, my storyline ideas arent the best at times and I should take more attention in to that, I have had more better ideas in the past but in this one I mostly based the animation on the graphics, leaving humor in to smaller attention, sadly.
Great art, weak humor
You need to work on your writing. I can understand the sound problems, and the art style really made the flash, but the humor needed to be more original. Ytmnd fads always make terrible resorts.
Yeah, I should team up with a writer that has lots of original ideas.
Oh well, thanks for your review anyway.
needs dramatic work
i give you good effort for the long, and descent animation, but the comedy is way off. the audio sounds like you used several different $10 mic's you bought at wal-mart. try to stick to one mic when you record or even get some recording software that may help you edit your tracks a bit better. you could also work on your delivery a bit more.
yeah, I should team up with a comedy writer since I mostly know the technical things, meanwhile when my ideas tend to be less good.
Also we live in separate locations so it's hard to use the same mic.
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Yeah ! I like your Megaman X shorts .
So , for this fourth video in the serie I ... Yeah. The drawings are better than the other but ... hmm ... I ... I didn't laugh too much for this 4th party . I think the humor of the precedents is better ...
Oh ! And I've found the music of DJ Dynamo randomly on Youtube ... (S. S. Bros . videos xD) ....
loled
I'm waiting for the next episode of the MMX Shorts .
Quickly ! XD
You rox .
yeah, I lost my motivation to do better script for this one unlike with the other ones I have made in the past.
Oh well, thanks for your review!
