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Reviews for "OLD MOBS EP3"

Good.

There's room for much improvement in the series, especially when it comes to cinematics. But what I judge on is effort, and it looks like you put loads of effort into this, plus I can tell you are honestly going for a decent plot. Keep on doing what you're doing and you will definitely improve greatly over the next several episodes. I have to give you props for doing your best and not doing half-assed work, just make sure that every episode is an improvement over the last and you'll do great.

As for this episode, it was pretty good, not as many awkward parts as I expected. Something you should definitely work on is the awkward parts, such as near the end where the three bad guys were slowly tweening into position with an action background. Also, when the the mouths of the characters open, the lower part of their faces gets distorted and it looks strange. I realize you may be doing that on purpose, but i think it would be better to either shift the jaw down when they talk, or not at all, rather than expand the lower part of the head. Try to show emotion better with your characters. Carefully formulate your plot to make it more believable. Besides those things, the flash was pretty good.

I approve of your effort on this and if more people did their best on newgrounds, there would be much less spam and crappy submissions on here. Again, keep up the good work and never give up!

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks and I'm glad you can see that we are improving with each release, and we're putting all of our talent to use, so you will see it grow better and better and closer and closer to perfection. Thanks for the advice and we hope to see you again for Episode 4

-Taco Buttfish

Great job!!

Again great improvement on animation and flash overall...great job with the voices and nice adds with the music...i like the music for the Elder...keep up the great work. I gave a 10 because each time a submission is made it is better than the one before so keep at it and keep them coming...I think it would be in NGs best interest to give you guys your own collection when u make a couple more episodes. :)

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! See you back for Episode 4

-Taco Buttfish

I can see all the effort into this flash

But since it is a flash if you decide to cut down on the details and more of the fluid movement, maybe add more motion to the characters you'd do much better and the flash would be much more appealing despite the decrease in detail.

But Overall good job on originality and voice acting.

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

-Taco Butfish

<Review Request Club>

~Plot~
Story was great. Ran smoothly with the last episode. The cut-off for the next episode was okay. Be sure to have some original ideas.

~Art & Design~
This part really saved the movie. Art was excellent. It looked like you spent a lot of time on the background and characters.

~Animation~
Here's where you lost points. The frame rate still looks like doing it at 12fps. You really need to work on that. Make the character interact quicker. Halfway, there was some noticeable pauses between dialogue. Lip sync was okay.

~Other~
The scene selection was a great touch. And the Character Bios were awesome! I really hope you keep those features in the next one.

~InnerChild548

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! I hope you'll be back to see the improvements for episode 4! And glad you noticed the extras and improvements since our last episode!

-Taco Buttfish.

Great

People who do not vote a 4 or 5 on this are obviously idiots who are obsessed with sonic, stickmen, or dicks.

Amazing Stuff, Quality is great, and whoever does the voice acting for Moose rocks!! haha

tacobuttfish responds:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

-Taco Buttfish.