hmmm

it was alright =p

Not terrible, but not great.

Some of the animation was pretty choppy. It was pretty amusing, though. The puns were goofy, but goofy isn't always bad if that's what you're going for. Oh, and the sound quality was rough. Other than that, it wasn't all too disappointing.

needs a looooooooooot of work

I think that most of all, you need to run your jokes through people don't put in the first thing that comes to mind because chances are it's going to be crappy and please don't be really random like that it makes the story hard to follow...

I also wanted to say that EVERYONE looked like rubber! i think you should focus on doing shadow, not light reflecting off them O.o

and get a better mic...

sigh that might have been more amusing

if I was tripping my a** off.

Total Review

animation:
quality was much better than the other ones, but the movement and talking was still very choppy, maybe improve the enviroment next time, the ...sigh...sporest.....and the "city" were lacking in density. The shading and lighting were much better.

sound & dialouge:
sound quality was horrible, the forced puns made me want to kill myself, maybe get some voice actors for new characters, and spend some time figuring out some decent jokes and dialouge.

story:
ok so far, but maybe start explaining some of the giant plot holes in the series next episode, such as the giant dome...

overall:
a good, semi-original series that is beaten,burned, and car-dragged by means of audio,dialouge, and puns. just improve on these and u got a frontpage series. Hope to see more in the future!!!